Talking_Pinata

I do the same thing. I just *thinks* I guess you could say poop out words and see what happens. Great poem! Add some punctuation though! It'd help with flow.

Ah. It's an anxiety attack. I'll put that in the author's note. Thankyou for the comment!

This? This was awesome.

Wow. My jaw dropped at the last line. This was nice too. I love your writing. Wonderful job.

Wow. This is nice. And the first stanze made perfect sense to me. I loved this. you earn a star

I agree. It was pretty good and you broke away from the uber cliche-ness I find in most poems! *gives you candy* On the other hand, the images could be ...

Ummm....thankyou? Haha.

Thankyou for the review! I've changed some things around according to what you've pointed out as mistakes or "nit-picks" Thankyou!

Thankyou for the review! I agree with what you said about the last bit. I'll get to reworking that as soon as possible! Thanks again!

So sorry. I want reviews cause I need them. So sorry for bumping. (and sorry AGAIN)

Thankyou! You're critique is appreciated!

thankyou for the compliment! That's more of the feeling I was intending, great job at figuring it out! XD

That was nice, I loved every bit of it, great work!

I have to say I agree with the people above, it is rather confusing as to what is going on...maybe write more and it helps to explain? Sorry for being ...

Thankyou for the critiques but I won't be changing this poem as to the fact that some people really seem to enjoy it...! THANKYOU for the praise as well!