Talking_Pinata

Thankyou for the review! I'm going to consider your idea. It's catching my interest.

Thankyou for the review! Means alot that you did so!

Can I just add to the crowd and say that you invovled some very nice imagery! Really! I love the title alot as well, very attention grabbing. Awesome poem too! ...

Glad you like it. I'm even more glad that it made you think!

Thankyou, once again for the compliments! I feel like a winner poet or something. X3

Sad, rhythmic, and moving. Is there much else you need in a poem?! Nice all around, great work, and you earned yourself a lovely golden star! Wonderful poem, once again!

Wow. I almost have no idea what that said, in a good way. It left an imprint on my mind of a message that I'll be learning later in life, ...

Thankyou everyone! And yes, this is supposed to poke fun at cliche. Not really supposed to be that much of an emotional piece, but I'll take the compliments I can ...

Thankyou! More compliments! I can't believe it!

Sorry, for the bump. Really, really sorry.

Hey! Sorry that it is so close to your story! That's a complete coincidence, I promise! Thankyou for the review and I'll be making changes very soon in the future.

Thankyou! I appreciate the compliments! I thought that might need more description too. I'll be looking into that very soon.

Thankyou! Wow! This makes me feel really great right now! Thankyou for the gold star and the compliments! They made my day by far!

Sorry. I really need reviews so I'm bumping it.

Ah! Thankyou for the critique! Very helpful! Means alot! I understand your point about pace, I'll be looking into that as well!