Talking_Pinata

O.o? Alright then. Gay marriage is good. (not. Sorry. I'm straight XD) Thankyou? ^^; ?

That was the point. Thankyou.

I can honestly say I started to cry at the last line. No more critique needed.

Just a quick disclaimer: Sorry for not knowing much about poetry. I tried this today in english class and I just want somethoughts on how it turned out.

Congrats on doing the difficult task of grabbing my attention! The first stanza, although repetitive, work amazingly well. I read it to the end, and these are the emotions I ...

Wow. That was very deep. One tip, add punctuation! That'd improve the flow alot, but I like how the beat-ish thing is.

I really would appreciate reviews...

Hmmmmm....one thing....9 in the afternoon is a recently created P!ATD song (panic! At the disco)

Thankyou for the praise! It means more than you can imagine! ^^

I need some more edits! Sorry so much for bumping DX

Thankyou! I'll be looking into the things you pointed out later today! Glad you liked it!

Thankyou for the review! I've tried to edit and expain some, and I'll be thinking about how to change that even more efficiently!

Thankyou! Everyone! I've done my best to edit it in the ways I saw fit! I'm eagerly awaiting more reviews! ^^

Wow. Just. Wow. Genius again my good friend. Genius again. Only a COUPLE things in the last paragraph where letters are missing. Other than that. Just. Wow. Genius again.

I'm VERY sorry for bumping this, I'm hoping for some more grammatical reviews (as well as overall) but mostly grammatical.