TaliaSankEden

This is honestly amazing. There are a few phrasing choices that I would have done differently, but seeing as this is your story, I'm not bothered. When I saw the ...

I just was sifting through your comments down below, and I saw your description of poetry being "three-dimensional and no-dimensional" all at once. I think you should know that that ...

Thanks for reviewing! This is an intensely personal piece for me, and so some of the lines in there are actually things that have happened or ring true for me. ...

Thank you for the review! I will definitely look into fixing these things; much of the grammar was simply my terrible editing capabilities! Anyway, I really appreciate your time, and ...

I'll add more for sure, though some of it may come later! :)

Made some changes! Some of the stuff was my brain working faster than my fingers, and I just screwed it up and did a terrible job of editing. :D Thanks ...

I'm very glad you enjoyed my work. Her full name is Abilene Jude Collier, hence the AJ. Have you read the other parts of the novel? Thank you for the ...

Thanks for the input! I have a tune. It's kind of a pop ballad sort of feel. :) I really appreciate your review!

I love everything about this! I'm crying tears of joy inside because this is like the most beautiful thing I've ever read and it was inspired by the way my ...

Thank you for taking the time to review my story! The vagueness of the story is intentional. In writing this, my hope was that readers would fill in the blanks ...

Thank you so much! AJ is a girl. I realized after I posted this that it was not particularly clear. You'll find out her full name later. It happens to ...

I wish I could offer some sort of real review, but I can't find anything to critique. All I can say is BEAUTIFUL work. It's really something special.

This is really sweet! The word choice is a little immature in some places, but it's really lovely. I hope you read this to your mom, and I'm sure she ...