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Re: No hands
Thank you, come again.
Dec 1, 2013 -
Re: This other Eden.
NOTE FROM THE AUTHOR; READ THIS SLOWLY OR IT MAY GET CONFUSING.
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: Just a milestone.
Nice improvements, but I think you are being harsh on yourself in the first extract. It is not as bad as you make out.
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: Earth's First Blood
:-)
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: Earth's First Blood
Thanks! Incase you were wondering I am English, and the title is a quote We speak the tongue that Shakespeare spake, The faith and morals hold that Milton held, In ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: Would you like to know how you died?
This is a perfect length, perfect story, needs no improvement.
Nov 26, 2013 -
Re: This other Eden.
Thanks! I'm glad to hear you like second person so much! It's not to everyones liking. As I have said I will correct spelling etc once I have my netbook. ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Government.
Of corse its up to you, didn't mean to insult or anything. :-)
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: This other Eden.
Thanks for your review, sorry about any grammar/spelling, but I am writing all this on a phone! I had a clever (confusing) reason for second person and hazyness of character. ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Government.
Unneeded ones.
Nov 23, 2013 - Re: Trapped In A Cage. Nov 23, 2013
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Re: Government.
Oops I think I just wrote the same review twice. Kind of difficult on a phone
Nov 23, 2013