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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Hat Man.

    Done! That any better?

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Hat Man.

    Thanks! I don't want to add detail to the hat man (the character, not the poem) because A) I don't want to make the poem any longer and B) The ...

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Horror Re: Roses and Chocolate

    Your welcome! If you need poetry reviews I'm in Review for food :-)

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Potential comes in black and white.

    Thanks! :-)

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Hat Man.

    :-)

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Hat Man.

    Thanks for the review. Sorry about the dashes, but it's just my editing software won't let me have blank lines. Could you perhaps be a little more specific about the ...

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Hat Man.

    Thanks! I think it is more an impression f the hat man lasting for ever than a real thing :-) don't forget to like!

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Hat Man.

    Thanks! I think it is more an impression f the hat man lasting for ever than a real thing :-) don't forget to like!

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Hat Man.

    :-)

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Hat Man.

    Thanks alot. Don't forget to like!

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Satire Re: Things Just Got Complicated

    Huzzah! However all credit for "take that you fiend" is ken st andre's. Little did you know you cast the basic attack spell on instagram. :-)

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Falling Embers

    Your welcome, I think it would help, to separate the last line in length and give it more weight. :-)

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Scribbling Galaxies

    Now this is hard for me to not write this review to positive, cause, well IT'S ABOUT DOCTOR WHO! (Although, methinks no John Pertwee.) Instead I shall write a long ...

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Death Wish

    And it did. I can read the future! :-)

    Jan 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Berry yoghurt freedom

    Your welcome! :-)

    Jan 1, 2014


I'm all in favor of keeping dangerous weapons out of the hands of fools. Let's start with typewriters.
— Solomon Short