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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Did You Know That If You Asked?

    I could be completely mis-reading this, but I saw this as a religious poem. I am a Christian, and this could be Christian, but I don't know. Anyhow this is ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: Polluted Romance (First time I ever wrote in second person)

    Drat, that should have been a review.

    Feb 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sugar Sweet Sky

    *nom*

    Feb 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Politics Re: Crush the French!

    It says, wait a mo', being short for moment. :-) Thanks for the review!

    Feb 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Politics Re: Crush the French!

    Don't forget to "like"!

    Feb 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Politics Re: Crush the French!

    Woha! New Avatar!

    Feb 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Politics Re: Crush the French!

    Thanks! Don't forget to like!

    Feb 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Politics Re: Crush the French!

    Thanks! Don't forget to like!

    Feb 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Politics Re: Crush the French!

    I always make that mistake! Thanks!

    Feb 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: On the brink.

    Well done Mr. Fibulie your death shall be postponed.

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Other » Satire, Romantic Re: To My Ex

    Sounds like a burger king catch line. Clever poetic device! :-)

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Other » Satire, Romantic Re: To My Ex

    I got a load of insults mixed with likes for my religious work. Don't let it bug you.

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: On the brink.

    Oh, also I don't know if you read the description, but the first three lines have the double meaning of suicide also. :-) Call it a dislike of grim poems!

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: On the brink.

    Thanks! :-) The last change in rhyme scheme was deliberate, to contrast the last line a little.

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: On the brink.

    Thanks! Don't forget to like! :-) (that is a threat :-))

    Feb 5, 2014


The blood jet is poetry and there is no stopping it.
— Sylvia Plath