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  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Twerk (A Poem From A Rapper's Point of View)

    I repeat, ahehehehehe! This really is funny, as I have little liking for rap music! Just a quick question concerning the description-isn't Dr. Strangelove a cold war film, otherleywise entitled ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: What Penguins Really Think

    Hello! The fiend of paint the roses red to review your poemlet! This poem suits your name perfectly, and it is really hard to review, because is so totally light-hearted ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: The Apocalypse Is Near

    Ahehehe! This really is a very humourous poem, even though I didn't understand all of the lines, due my lack of exposure to television. The last line was a nice ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: John Steinbeck's "Of Mice & Men"

    Hello! One totally bias counter argument supported by little evidence, brought on by forced study in ENGLISH literature. ENGLISH! (note: not American literature. ) Steinbeck's writing is totally based

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stars of ink

    Hello Insanesuptlety! Every word I write is points for red team! This is a lovely poem. I see your lack of punctuation is a clever poetic device that I have ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: Invasion of Chocolate

    Can I send in my C.V? (Ahehehe) Greetings fellow Pompadour-spammer, and also fellow paint the roses red member! This really is a cheary work, and brightened up my day. Why ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: 300 ft²

    Well done! This poem worked really well, and is an interesting idea, not one I have come across in many poems. I didn't quite understand the last line; What does ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Just One, A True Friend

    This is a very moving poem, (go red!) The subject is a reasonably original one, and is easy to agree with. I am surprised there aren't more poems about it, ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Hero

    This is a lovely poem, with a fine cyclatic ending. (Go red!) I think the line "so untamed, against me" has a couple of faults, namely it doesn't scan too ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Someone Else Has it Worse

    Hello! I am now officially review-bombing you! This is a fine short free form poem, in your usual style. I totally agree with the point made, although I think I ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Wil You Ever Love Me?

    This is a lovely short freeverse poem! (Go red, go red!) Like the comment below, it think this needs verses, but I will elaborate. The single word "You" is powerful ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Just Wanted to Say

    What a cheery poem! Go red team! This is a very straight-forward love poem by itself, and if it wasn't for the authors note I would have had no idea ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lost

    Hello! Every letter I write in this review is points for Paint the Roses Red! This is a great first poem, and I certainly wish my first was as good. ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Health Re: I used to love staring at my night-light

    Hello pomegranate (I am running out if annoying nick-names) I will assume this is a draft, seeing as it has no previous reviews, and so I will not comment on ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Curses

    Greeeeetings Pompadom, time to meat your reviewing fate. This is a very nice and somewhat spooky poem. I hope it is not personal experience. The like breaks in this poem ...

    Jan 26, 2014


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