TakeThatYouFiend

Hello again! In comparason to some of your other works this is glitter and sunshine. The rhythm is perfect. Is it a ballad or am I getting my terminology confused. ...

It is pieces like this that make me feel so privileged. You have made me pity you, and now I intend to dissect how like a good little Sherlock. The ...

Here to review your nice friendly poetry! This brings two words to my mind; paradox and oxymoron. This is the main device and message methinks; the way you show these ...

Now that was harsh. But ya gotta love a structured poem. It is always nice to see a well structured poem like this, particularly when the structure pattern is original. ...

The simple formatting (despite my usual traditionalist argument) works really well in this method, and it works rather lyrically and it emphasizes the mirroring in the rhyming couplets, and seems ...

Wow. Read it once, no idea. Read it twice, and this is so beautiful. I know that I, and methinks many other people, wonder how others think. That I knew ...

This beginning was amazing! It reminds me so much of a song I know about a young girl who frequents the cinema because her dad the electrician put in the ...

Hello! This is a lovely poem, and not as teenage depression cliched as I expected it to be! :-) The rhythm and rhyme pattern are practically flawless (exept the last ...

This is peculiar to me. It is as if you are saying you don't want to be happy, but the definition of happy is pleasure, not a fake plastered smile. ...

This is strange. And I mean that in a good way. This reminds me of an episode of the mighty Boosh ("Tommy" if you know it) where they spend the ...

Disclaimer: I have not heard the original. With any luck I never will. I looked up the original lyrics however and I must say you did a pretty good job. ...

Hello again Pompadour, just so you know this review is going to entirely be me shouting about my favorite sentence in this, which is.... "Let's teach paper butterflies to fly". ...

Hello Dorapomp! I liked the switching between rhyming and spoken rhythm, because it shows that you didn't not rhyme just because you couldn't be bothered. I am not going to ...

Disclaimer: I am a Pertwee fan. This is really good, and truly matches the feeling that I would associate with that episode (which in my opinion is on of the ...

Greeeetings! I felt I should review in return, so when I saw you had a doctor who folder I had to review! There are no apparent flaws in spelling, punctuation, ...