TSun

You seem like someone who enjoys freedom, no? Or perhaps your poem may have been your minds attempt to be free? The poem itself flows somewhat, although some lines may ...

Quote: moaning wind on full-moon night fear in my heart and blood in my sight This seems...forced. I'm not sure why. Also, it's kind of a sudden contrast from those ...

I...I feel green today. Not the fresh, new-life spring green But a faded, yellowish green. The green of a dying plant. The green of this dying plant, Here in the ...

As some people have pointed out before me, this seems to belong more in fiction than in poetry. Perhaps I'm wrong. Well i also have to get this off my ...

I actually really enjoy this! The goodness comes from the simple (yet complex) lines. No need to feel confused about something like this if you've never done it before, which ...