TNCowgirl

Whoops, sorry. I forgot about that. I fixed it.

Man, that was really really really sad. :'(. BUt good at the same time. :D

I Like I like, can't wait for more. Tell me when. I think they are going to MADD. I hope they are going to it seems like they will. I ...

I think this is supposed to be in another section.

Twas good, discribes how cruel he really was and now how badly his charactor has been beaten, he is close to going crazy now it seems if he isn't already!!!!!!!

YAY more, I liked I liked :D

Umm... That last line that is happens in Texas is way off. Sorry, but gays hide or run from there. Its not the most friendly state to gay rights. On ...

I loved it, it was good. I like the first part too!!!!!!! I'm not the best critiquer. But I like to look at things from the readers point of veiw ...

Keep going please!!! IT is really really really good.

So I'm not any good at criting, but from a readers stand point this looks really good. I can't wait for more to get posted!!!!!!

Ah, its soooo depressing, and its good, doesn't flow perfectly, but I like it. Course I'm not the best with poetry, but yea.

Wow, all three of them are good, the really are, sad too. :D I like how you worded it, and just a perfect amount of discription. Two thumbs up for ...

I LIKE, it is COOL!!!

Keep going!!! But just one question, can he change form from dragon to humen???

Crystal, the reason the paragraphs are all funny is cause I didn't want to hurt anyone's eyes. And she lives at a bar, any sort of weapon to her is ...