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Thanks!

Thanks again!!!!!

Thank you so much! I feel so embarrassed about the spelling mistakes. :P But I've been working on more episodes, and I think I've gotten better with dialogue.

Flora and Hunter are different people. But thanks for the comment, I've written 4 more episodes to date.

Thanks, but she's not dreaming, only imagining her being in the role of the girl, who she doesn't know is her yet.

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Thanks so much! I'm really sorry to say, but I'll be gone until September, with no Wi-fi! So, I plan to finish revising 5 more episodes and work on writing ...

Wait . . . what? This is a television screenplay, not a stage play!

Thanks! I know my story moves quickly, but it's a short episode. I have 12 other episodes I'm writing, and those will be up soon, okay?

About my formatting, I'm using a professional software and my professional screenwriter mother to help me with that, so I can't really change it. If you look at a real ...

Thanks so much! I'm going to have the second episode up next week!

I thought this piece was very sweet and witty. It was a bit short, though, I'd like to learn a bit more about these characters!

Thanks so much! You're suggestion about the dialogue is nice, but I've I use a professional screenwriting software (Final Draft) and that small formatting will get me out of the ...

I write scripts all the time! You should check them out.

I'm a whovian too, but there's something in my brains that understands all the timey-wimey stuff the the Doctor says. Doctor Who and Back to the Future were my main ...