Swiftfurthewarrior

Hi there, pretzelsnow! I loved this little anecdote! The way you described everything was amazing, almost as if the reader were there. I only noticed a few things wrong. The ...

Hi there, Arida! First off, this is wonderfully written! The pace and the characters as well as their emotions just flow together. There were some punctuation and other mistakes in ...

Hey there, Googlebot! I thought this poem was amusing and well thought out. The way you described Google as if it were a person was amazing! However, I was a ...

Hey there, Flite! First off, this is amazing! I love the description of the fireworks and the way the whole thing just flows together. No spelling or grammatical errors, and ...

Hey there! I really liked this story. The characters were great, the setting painted a picture in the reader's mind, and the plot twist was totally unexpected. However, there were ...

Hey Stormcrow! I see you are a LOTR fan too. Anyway, this story was amazing! It had nice flow, and you could tell exactly which side the characters were on. ...

Hey there GoldFlame! I count J.R.R. Tolkien as one of my favorites too! I've seen the entire LOTR series, read more than half of The Hobbit, and seen Part 1/2 ...

Hello there griffin! You've written a wonderful poem there. It gives the reader a new perspective. However,the last two lines seem a little strange. I suggest tacking on, "Not a ...

Hello again! I liked your poem very much. There were no grammatical errors, but you did, however misspell a word or two. It kind of seemed to me like you ...

Hey there Rainn! I thought your poem was excellent! Nice flow, no spelling or grammatical errors. I like how you said the candle was afraid to be extinguished, and how ...

Wow. Incredible chapter. You described the flames and smoke very well. You also inspired panic in the reader. It was almost like rushing through the flaming house yourself! No grammatical ...

Hey capricious! I just happened along this poem and decided to give my opinion and advice. First of all, no spelling errors, but you could do with some capitalization. I ...

I have three words for you: What. Was. That. The title was what caught my attention. Because it's so, strange,you've completed the first step, hooking the reader in. The rest ...

It sounds like you know pegasusgirl2 well. Anyways, this poem is beautiful. No grammatical errors. No misspelling,no spacing issues. Nice rhyming, though. The flow of this poem is perfect. It ...

Swiftfur here to review for you! First off, I'd say your English class payed off. I find no spelling, grammar, or spacing issues. Second, it show the mind of every ...