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Hey dear, this one is beautiful.....

Hi @bellarke, this is amazing.. So emotional and meaningful..can connect to this. Loved the poem and keep writing...have a great day

Thank you dear and welcome to yws. Will tag you when i write a new poem if you want.

Thank you so much @eros. Happy that you liked it...good evening to you too

Thank you so much @eros. Happy that you liked it...good evening to you too

Hey, thank you for your opinion I will make the correction soon. And I divided it into paragraphs but it isn't working I don't know why. Glas you like it

Thank you dear friend for your review. Its really help. You too have a great day

It's really well written. And I like it a lot..you described it very well and it perfect the way it is.. I don't think there is any correction needed.it's beautiful... ...

It's really well written. And I like it a lot..you described it very well and it perfect the way it is.. I don't think there is any correction needed.it's beautiful... ...

Yes, tag me..

It's really well written. And I like it a lot..you described it very well and it perfect the way it is.. I don't think there is any correction needed.it's beautiful... ...

Most welcome....

Hey @HiddenMask, sweta here... Okay, so this is really different and great actually. I liked the way you described each trees as if you are describing some human being.. The ...

Hii Amma, It is really good. The character the hen and the rabbit you described them well.. you justify this as a fable. Some characters some story with good morale. ...

Hey dear friend, hope you are well... I liked this a lot.. I haven't read the other parts but i think i should.. And i am gonna start from tomorrow. ...