Sweetsinger

Guys control your emotions . she is very much alive. :D :)

You are most welcome..

Thanks

Thank you everlasting flame but the last para was certainly misinterpreted by you It talks about how at last we all find bliss in heaven as we all in the ...

definitely let me know when you have written chapter 2. I eagerly await it:D

no problem :)

thanks for the critical update.Will surely try to follow your suggestions.

Thanks but I guess you got it wrong .I mean she is alive but not with me She went to some other school. She is still in touch with me ...

read mine and comment please

Love your expression... Hate the feeling it gives me...cause I feel like a tangled mess and well its bad

I loved the thought. I share the same feelings,so good attempt. Try to follow a rhyming scheme. Your best friend would be proud to have a friend like you.

I loved the thought. I share the same feelings,so good attempt. Try to follow a rhyming scheme. Your best friend would be proud to have a friend like you.

I loved the thought and the idea.:):D Its a great work full of romantics. Just try to work upon the use of words. They need to convey more of your ...