Sweetie

Hey! This is Sweet and I going to review this! :) This is an interesting piece. I have never read anything like it, so that good. This is really hard ...

Hey, this is Sweet and I am going to review this. :) it was really good but a couple things: "My mom, Cindy came into the room." There should be ...

Hey, its Sweet and I'm going to review this. First off, that is really good! I love all of it. I thought it was really cool how you sometimes spaced ...

I read this anyhow... OOOOOO well. Like you said I am proud of you. :) I really like this, its a little dark...but very good. My favorite stanza is number ...

Hey, its Sweet here to review!! This was really good! I just want you to know that it makes total sense! I love that its so dramatic! In some places ...

Hey, this is Sweet writing you a review!!! Like you said it is relatable!! I believe at one point everyone has felt some true terror in there life. I know ...

That was amazing but, I don't like how we have to scroll to read the rest of it. Everything else was really good. I love how you spelled F.A.M.I.L.Y. throughout ...

Hey! Its Sweet (also known as Bell from MLP)!! This is really good! It's simply amazing. I love fireflies and this makes me feel like I just met a firefly, ...

That's really good! It totally relatable because I have been through a lot of tough things and I solve all my problems with music. Reading this it was easier to ...

Hey! Sweet here! I don't think I have ever read one of your works but, with just reading this one I can tell you are a really good writer! When ...

I totally agree!!!! Society wants us to be our self but, then they turn around and say "Oh, wait, that's not good enough... Too bad." We will never live up ...

This is quite hard to review... I don't really understand it. Maybe I'm not reading it right. I don't know, its hard to understand for me, but it is good. ...

HEY!!! I really liked this poem. My favorite part was the last stanza because this girl finally got away from the person who was hurting her. I loved how the ...

I love it! I loved how you said "Mistaken love with a man Who treated me as his contraband." I don't know what makes me love this line so much! ...

That's amazing and totally relatable! For me it depends on who I'm talking to, too. You are a really good writer. I loved the description words you chose, for me ...