SweetOctober

It was an enjoyable story overall, but it would be nice if you specified exactly what time period it's set in--if this is one of those traditional dragon-tales that are ...

I have to say that when compared to a lot of the disgustingly overused conventions flooding bookstores these days, especially where it concerns the sadly cliche-butchered YA section, this is ...

This poem was so beautiful. Reminds me of two children falling in love. I really liked the words you used. Its how love should feel always, but it always manages ...

I think the imagery is great. Though the last part of the poem I didn't like too much. Here's how I interpreted your poem upon reading it. Here are some ...

What a poem that so deeply and profoundly explains the sordid state of the world this is. Very discriptive. And I loved the imagery and the language. --------------------------------------------------

There's just something about a poem so simple and evocative that I just can't stop loving it. I really liked your language in here. I love the word fury for ...

This was a really heartwarming poem. It actually sounds like something I would write. And I could relate to that poem completely. Simply a work of pure genius and from ...

You bug killer... But I did like it. It was cute. All the while I read this poem, I thought the child was killing insects because he enjoyed it. But ...

Yet another poem that depicts well written despair. Very good. Hope to read more from you soon. And also, I think that poetry is a great way to heal a ...

What I immediately imagined was a teenager in an insane asylum staring at a crowd of people through the confines in his cell. I know. I have a pretty wierd ...

I like this poem. Though I'm not a fan of the theory of evolution. I can go on and on about the inconsistencies of the theory, but I'm not going ...

I wonder who this is referring to. When I first read it, the word "sin" popped in my head. But it sounds more like a man who has a terminal ...

I like this. Kissing in the rain is something I hope I can do someday. Don't stop writing poetry. It's fun and its a great way to get praise and ...