SweetMarie

Thanks so much for the reply! The reason I used Athena was because of her birth story where Zeus has a terrible headache and she comes out of his head. ...

Oh, you flatter me:)

Thanks so much! I really appreciate the feedback!

Thanks so much, I'll check your stuff out!

Thanks! I probably should have mentioned in the description, I'm working on a weird novel project where the story is told through two writers journals, so the poem would be ...

It's not lyrics. I'm in the middle of a sort of odd project, actually. It's a very simple novel told through the diaries of two poets, so I think it ...

So, I don't know much about the character you're trying to go for, but it almost seems like you are caught between two voices in this piece. What would make ...