SwallowedByInsanity

I, personally, suck at coming up with titles. I think maybe a better title might be (and I usually go with something for the first or last stanza) would be ...

Wow. I loved this truly, just the content and everything was fantastic. It reminded me of a girl I know and how she always says I should "go out and ...

I loved your poem, beautiful flow and imagery. It was very flowery and has earned a like from me, which is rather uncommon! Unfortunately, many people are able to relate ...

My body is covered in the pain I've had to endure. But my soul carries so much more then you'll ever see. Shredded and torn beyond recognization, *recognization is not ...

I lay with you on the hospital bed Ignoring the lies that the doctors said I remembered the day when hopes rose above And all I could say was Don't ...

our blood was burnt in a pot on the stove the rats turned their noses from us we broke vases on their heads and we stirred our blood when it ...

Life is hard. That's the simple way to put It. But in reality, There's no other way to put It. Great stanza! short and to the point. Where we stand, ...

I'm standing alone again and singing this song once more there something missing this time i just doesn't seem right... you don't rhyme in this stanza, but you rhyme in ...

One late winter evening, all rainy and black, 'dripping in rain and black' might put a better image in the reader's head I tapped at my keyboard - a quick ...

If I beg you not to leave will you stay with me and believe, in stories of Santa’s reindeer that you whispered in my ear. replacing "stories" with "tales" might ...

He was with me from the start. He supported me for what was correct. From my baby days on wards, brother, led me with strong courage. "He supported me for ...

wow, you're quite the lyricist! I just wanted to mention that I absolutely loved your harry potter song and this didn't fail to meet my expectations. Beautifully written and has ...

2 things. I love harry potter (potter puppet pals ftw) and i LOVE your icon! hahaha oh run, with his ruffled suit... anyway, onto the song. It was hilarious and ...

I, personally, as a poet, do not bother with grammar and 'proper spacing'. That's a load of mish mosh that takes away from the artistic being of the poetry, when ...

I thought your random numbers of lines per stanza was interestingly put. Poetry should not be about conforming to the usual, 4 line stanzas, rhyme this rhyme that, little bit ...