Susurrus

Hello! I like this piece because of the rawness that is conveyed. I think that I have trouble just throwing my emotions into a piece without censoring them, and you ...

Hello! I like this piece because though it is prose, it is very poetic. Your descriptions are clear and beautiful. I just have a few comments - 1. as if ...

I love your interpretation of the emotion love. It's so all-encompassing. I just have a few comments. 1. Love is an emotion, that make or break relationships. I think you ...

Hello! I love this poem because of its deceptive simplicity and astounding depth. One thing I'm wondering about is the second and third line of the first stanza. When you ...

Hello! I really like the story, and though it's brief, I feel like the pacing is well done! You've covered a substantial amount of time in such a short piece ...

Hello! I love the atmosphere of this poem. It's dark and misty and the words you use give it so much mystery and depth. I just have a few comments, ...

Hello! I really hope that I can make you feel a bit better, as I myself have gone through a time in my life where I felt utterly alone and ...

Hello! I love the tone and simple style you've created here. It really helps the message to come across. Your voice is so effective and I feel myself comprehending your ...

Hello! I really like these lyrics, they are very powerful without losing sight of their musical intent. I just have a few comments - 1. So I bet be mean ...

Hello! Very interesting piece you've written. I love the atmosphere you've created and your lush descriptions make the setting seem almost surreal. There are a few things I want to ...