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Thanks y'all. I've made some simple edits to it, and will probably make more major edits sometime in the future. In other news, Part Three is also up.

Thanks for the reviews guys. ^_^ I'll be sure to refer back to your crits when I come to edit this in a couple of days. For anyone interested, Part ...

You said it messed up? Best fix it, cos right now I have no idea what you've tried to do/say. :(

Well, he's not really posing. That sort of publicity photograph isn't all that uncommon.

Wuthering Heights FTW. It's a story of love, of passion, of hatred, and of revenge.

I'm sorry, but keening is a practice that appeared in only two small countries (Scotland and Ireland) and is now extinct. In my opinion, that is the very definition of ...

Take harsh commets? He's been calling other people's work '****' and insulting them.

Can we please banhammer this guy? I've just been looking over his other posts, and I really think he deserves the banhammer. tis is the bigest piece of **** ive ...

I'm guessing a mod killed it. How many exclamation marks did you need?

Hello Wozzel - thanks for the timely reply (indeed: it appears you were so fast in reacting that you actually began work on this review in the twenty or so ...

I've read the origional short story version, but not the full novel.

I'm loving how this poem got no reviews for two and a half years, and then all of a sudden recieved seven.

When I was reading this, I was thinking, 'this isn't up to Jack's usual standard.' Then I looked at the date and it all made sense. ^_^

The best advice I can think to give you right now: avoid cliches. ^_^ Your first two lines are horribly cliched. I think you rhymed well, though. The rhyme scheme ...