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I'm not going to crit this. That you made a typo in such a short poems betrays that put no time, care of love into this poem. Critting it would ...

I would like to say that I wasn't trying to say that Hitler was an atheist, only that if Hitler had won it would have pointed the world in a ...

Necroposting FTW? Seriously, I'm seeing so much of it now. What's the point of bringing up a three year old poem? And wow: 15 year old Incan doesn't have the ...

Now its my time to go On to different places in the world To find new discoveries But this isn't why I am leaving. I Like this part but why ...

The poem is neither confusing nor is it in any conceivable way 'different'. To the contrary, it is simplistic and it is cliched. I can type in the words 'emo' ...

Open the file on your computer. Highlight all the text you want to post on the site. Copy it (ctrl+c), come over to YWS, make a new post, paste it ...

’lo Jiggity. ^_^ Apart from his desk , and stuffed bookcase , there was no other furniture in the sparse, austere room. I don’t think the bolded commas are really ...

Hello there Gothgirl01. ^_^ I could go over spelling and grammar errors in this, but I'll leave that for another time. (Try re-reading this a few times to spot them ...

‘lo Dreami. ^_^ This final battle would seal the fate of Esrydil forever. Good opener. It grabs the reader’s attention from the very beginning. My heart pounded f ast, f ...

‘lo again, dude. ^_^ I won’t bother pointing out the problems with dialogue grammar. I’ll let you fix ‘em yourself. ^_^ walking down the white washed walls filled with beautiful ...

‘lo there Errant. ^_^ I’m impressed by the amount you’ve written and the amount of work you’ve put into world-building. I wish I was as dedicated. :( Having said that, ...

Hello there R.J. Hoffman. ^_^ I was going to give this story a review, seeing that it has yet to recieve any, but I'm afraid you've done a couple of ...

‘lo there Rory. ^_^ Before I begin the crit, I suppose I’d best out that YWS has a rule stating that before you post your own story/poem, you have to ...

Hello there ren3494. ^_^ Some thoughts: 1) Re-read this. This is the golden rule of writing. Proofreading is oh so important. There are a number of silly mistakes in here ...

Yay for vampire stories. ^_^ the corpse that once had been a live , ‘a live’ = ‘alive’. First paragraph: A good hook for an opener, but it leaves me ...