Sureal

Seen the movies (both Interview and Queen). Interview was a good movie. Queen, not as good (the music was the best bit... unfortunatly, you can't get the songs sung by ...

People hate(d) Bush. people hated Clinton, people hated Bush Sr. There's always people who hate their president, so people make these jokes. Nothing new, but funny none the less. Bush ...

*twitches* Here's a hint - post this into Word and let it check your spelling and your grammar. Your icon confused me - at first I was shocked that Sureal ...

You got the diturbing factor right. I agree with Qi - this does feel it should be a poen instead of a story. I like the title (I slit my ...

I've read the first. Twas okay - quite confusing at first though. The world (I thought) was nice and unique. But unless I see them in my local library (and ...

I liked this :). My favourite imagery has got to be the cats and dogs floating down from the sky :P.

Hee hee :). I think favourite line in this has got to be, 'Marvin is so unlucky that he gets letters in the mail telling him he's lost contests he's ...

Wow, I really liked this. Heh - Gods :). Hm, not too sure how to critique this I'm afraid. Urgh - I guess I'll have to leave that for others ...

Cool. I was bit confused at first, but once I got a feel for the speech this was a good read :). The detective work was interessting to read and ...

It feels odd refering to the man's snake of a smile again. I mean, you mentioned it right at the end of the last chapter and then again at the ...

Hm, I suppose my points are similiar to Griffin's. I don't know what's going on, or why these people are doing these things (or how for that matter). But, other ...

#1 - The light from the sun (which is white light - light with all the colours of the spectrum) enters out atmosphere. Part of it, however, is refracted, and ...

Sounds good to me - the only real problem is that it's pretty much all dialouge. But as this is a speech (so to say) I suppose that's okay :). ...

Eh, whilst we're here: Sitting in a school assembaly. The teacher has just stopped talking, when, all of a sudden one of my friends let it rip. And this wasn't ...

This needs a little work. This either needs more of a begining - you've introduced lots of characters, in a very short space, right at the beinging. As such, I ...