SuperAnimalCrossing

Thank you for the amazing review! You made some excellent and in-depth points which I was glad to follow. In fact, I feel like the entire chapter ended up a ...

After reading that and re-reading the poem, I can see that now! That's a really great message, by the way, and very true.

Thanks for the review! I've been thinking of some ways to mess with that one part to make it sound better, and once I do, I'll be sure to edit ...

Thanks for the review! I'll do what I can to remember making those quick edits!

Thanks for the review! Telling instead of showing is a pretty bad habit of mine, so I'll go back and try to fix some of it. You made some really ...

Thanks for your review! The reason things didn't seem very suspensful, is because I wanted to start this story out as a cilche teen fiction. You know, where you're taken ...

Thanks for the review! It wasn't actually a dream though, it was just because the day was starting over. Sort of like the movie "Groundhog Day," where the main character ...

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Thanks for the review! As for your questions, I'm happy to provide some answers. Um, she said that she'd like to ask him some questions. I skipped over telling the ...

Thanks for the review! The fact that it confused you was actually the point, so I'm glad that worked. The reason some details are left out is because this was ...

Thank you! You made some excellent points and I'm glad you enjoyed. I'll try my best to follow some of your points in the near future!

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I can't wait to upload more!

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed and I was able to turn you mind around. You can find some really cool books around the Sci Fi genre, and I hope ...

Probably not. It's mostly just to set the hype. XD

Actually, the rest of the book up to maybe chapter five or six is a flashback leading up to this moment.