Sunshine

Hey, Welcome to YWS! I'm Sunshine and I'll be your reviewer today! *Takes a deep bow!* First of all, welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll love it here! Now- on ...

Congrats on the thirty >one< likes! You totally deserve it! I'm honestly not much of a romance person, but this was a really cute story! Since to many people have ...

Hey Shirdi! I see Razzy did the grammar stuff (Important: Listen to her) May I offer a piece of advice? Don't put jokes on the site. Just a personal preference, ...

Hey! Hey! Crafty here to review! Random nitpicks to get them out of the way because they truly don't have anything to do with the direct piece: Try not to ...

Oh...Um. Wow. *Tries hard not to gush* Ok. Anyway, I really like how this poem just kind of creeps up on you. You start out in an innocent enough fashion ...

Hey! Glad to see a little Warrior Fanfic around here again! I think I'm going to try and break this up from beggining to end to make this easier for ...

CSI: YWS here to investigate! So I saw this on the CSI page and decided to check it out. It was short, just like you said. Sweet? Not so much. ...

Team CSI: YWS here to investigate! I'm here to help, so purplepen has a second to her first! I also love the drama you've added onto this. It gives the ...

Hey! In honor of review week I decided to try and catch up on my Harvest Moon reading. (Not to mention be inspired by it, but that's besides the point. ...

I love the concept of this poem! Anyway, is there a first poem of this and is it conected in anyway? That part confused me and you may want to ...

This a great piece of non-fiction! Although, I warn you, I do not usually work on non-fiction or review it. Always good to try something new! - I'm glad you ...

Hm... I like it. I picture this as a soft song, probably more country. Like Fortissimo said, thinking Taylor Swift. Theme wise, for the most part I picture what Fort ...

Hey! I love the title, it's amazing! I do have quite a few nitpicks thought, but don't take it harshly. I'm trying to help. 1.) I felt like you did ...

Hey Lava! I've never really done a poem review with six poems in, although I'll do my best! Also, I will spotaneously swich around colors. I can never seem to ...

Hills. They are awful, aren't they? Still, rather helpful in some sort or form. More entertaining than running around on flat boring pavement. Then again, I don't have a bad ...