Published May 26, 2011
Book's for the soul,
None a mole,
Some a ghoul,
None a lie.
Can I die,
I don't know why,
Leave me dry,
With books for the soul.
In a hole,
With a mole,
And a troll,
I want a ghoul,
I'm on a roll,
With books for the soul.
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Hey! Hey! Crafty here to review!
Random nitpicks to get them out of the way because they truly don't have anything to do with the direct piece: Try not to comment on your own pieces. Honestly, not only is it annoying but it takes your piece out of the Recent Additions (0) category, which most reviewers check first. It would increase your views/reviews to keep it there. If you have something to say, just put it above the piece. If you forget it and publish the piece first, just go to the piece and click edit. It's hard to miss!
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Overall: There's really not a lot to say about this poem. It's very basic and not very deep. I mean, it's fine for a begginer but next time try to be more ambitious!
I loved it probably because i wrote it.