Sunshine

Hi, Sunshine from Team Plasma here on this wonderful review day to review it all! You've picked a topic the is a blatant flaw of many human beings, a problem ...

Ah! Two Team Rockets! I'll have to squeeze my way in here! Hi, I'm Sunshine, and I'm Team Plasma! I totally agree with Iggy. If you broke up some of ...

Hi! This is Sunshine, of Team Plasma, here to review for you today! The first thing I noticed was the title, and that's what really drew me to this piece. ...

Hi, it's Sunshine, of Team Plasma, here to review for you on this lovely review day. Now, I'm just hopping in on chapter ten, which is weird, but allows me ...

Hi, Sunshine here from Team Plasma to review. Let's get this out of the way; Don't know the band. Probably don't know the song. Reviewing for characters and writing in ...

Sunshine from Team Plasma here to review! See, and I always thought of you as a Storybook person. It's nice to know you write very good poetry as well. This ...

Sunshine from Team Plasma here to shed a little light! Okay. Let's go from start to finish, shall we? I'm a huge fan of dramatic first sentences, and that's a ...

Hi, Elinor! This is my first review of Review Day! Very excited! My first impression, I'll admit, was a bit of a turn off. I don't like seeing a story ...

So, I decided I needed to read more short-stories and was roaming around when the cute title grabbed me on this one. I'm Sunshine, and I'm here to shed some ...

Hi! So, It's been a really long time since I've reviewed, and decided it wasn't a shoddy distraction from studying for my ACT retake. I feel like this poem's structure ...

Okay, hi. You asked me to review this over PM and I'm here to do that for you. This is short. That was the first thing I noticed. Despite eloquent ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm Sunshine, and I'll be your reviewer on this beautiful (albeit cold, where I'm at) day! Points of Discussion: Your opening line is beautiful, poetic, and I ...

I haven't reviewed something that wasn't a poem in a really long time, so I decided to break off my lazy shoes and get reviewing. So, I saw your piece, ...

Hi, I'm Sunshine, and I'll be your reviewer for the day! It has been a long time since I've written a review, so bare with me. The first thing I ...

This was a difficult read, but yet another impressive feat by Hannah the poetress. Seriously, you write really freaking good poetry. :3 Anyway, the flow of this and the word ...