SummerSunshine

Hi milabales11, Summer here. I love your use of figurative language. This seems to be one of your talents as a writer, use it to your advantage!! You also seem ...

Hi milabales11, First off, I want to start of by saying welcome to YWS. I love your use of imagery in this piece. However, I'm not exactly sure what's going ...

Hi, SummerSunshine here with a review for you. I have things I love about this story, and a few suggestions. Most of the suggestions are mechanics related. Let's start with ...

Hey! Summer here, with a short review. The way you talk about the 'other people' here, reminds me of the bullies that used to hurt me, and bullies everywhere. They ...

Hi. SummerSunshine here. Okay, so some of the scenarios you describe here sound a little like the character lives in a country somewhat like India. Compliments: I like the things ...

I have mixed feelings about this. The facts are true, but they also break my heart because I love social media. I love the words that you chose for this ...

Hey. SummerSunshine here. So I love this poem. It reminds me of a novel I read called "The Palace of Stone" in the Princess Academy series by Shannon Hale, just ...

Hi. I love this concept, and as @HolographicLadybug said, the names. This would work as a perfect first chapter so you should think abut continuing this. I do feel like ...

I don't know what to say. It was a beautiful story, that had me in tears by the end. I loved you character Phil ,and how he was kind enough ...

I liked it, but it was a little hard for me to understand this,because I am still a "child". And I do not celebrate Christmas, but I have friends who ...