Sujana

HOLY STAY AWAY FROM THIS CONVERSATION THIS IS BETWEEN ME AND MY EX WIFE

i'll expect your review by the end of 2017

Frosts poetry--is that a reference to "Old Patch of Snow (the poem)" or is the narrator burning Frost poetry books? Great work, though. As a more story oriented person I ...

After-- Still late.

Before i start reading this-- Holy crap you're late.

I have no memory of writing this comment Elliot v0.1 must've gotten out again

Ah, I see. Well, I haven't much experience in either department, but I like your confidence. If you get rejected, don't sweat it--I'm not comparing you to Rowling or anything, ...

I wish you all the luck in that regard. Self-publishing or traditional?

I haven't written you off as a weirdo because I'm probably a bigger weirdo than you. Trust me.

I swear my review has more words than the actual work. Sorry love.

I love how this'll probably be on the spotlight. Normally I'd say "it doesnt deserve to be there theres no thought or effort" but then I remember this is donald ...

Not going to review this, unfortunately. However, pray for that guy you were talking to, yeah? I can't imagine a life of illiteracy. Must be torture.

Of course its okay with me! I mean, I did ask for a review, not a praise-craze. Also, now that I think about it you are right--but I think fancy ...

YES I DIDN'T HAVE TO YESSSSSSSS where is your work i shall save you (also YES YOU USED MY HORRIBLE PHOTOSHOP AS AN AVATAR YESSS)

heeey it actually worked But anyway, thanks for the review! Can I ask, though, do you have any examples for your 1) argument? I didn't really expect 'overuse of comma' ...