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Sujana

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  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: Like a Citrus

    I do like stories of discrimination, as most of the time they try to be very honest about their subject materials, and at least they actually point out that gay ...

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Lyrical, Realistic Re: China Doll

    Before I start this review, I can understand if you were just trying to write this from the perspective of a girl going through self-harm. However, if you yourself are ...

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Another Life

    You could say I'm a fan of end of the world scenarios. I find the desperation and the regret of the moment very intriguing, and your story summed it up ...

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Other Re: Why do we keep making children?

    So, um. I did a thing. Which is comment on your other work. And yes, I think I'm finding out that you have a thing for works that don't feel ...

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: The Cruelty of Women

    Favorite Line: "We all thought you probably died or something!” This must've been released for some time, but I saw the title and I just couldn't help myself. And really, ...

    Dec 4, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Snapshots

    Well, it's well known that one photograph is worth thousands of words, but this was surprisingly able to fit several of them in just over one thousand. While reading through ...

    Dec 3, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: baby ...."I love you"

    Hello. You might not like what I say, so feel free to shield your eyes if this wasn't meant to be reviewed. I liked how you used Let Her Go ...

    Dec 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: The One in The Box

    ...Well, I can firmly say that this at least isn't as confusing as the first Salvador Dali film I watched. Don't take that as an insult or a compliment, because ...

    Dec 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Civil War

    I think this needed work. I liked how the protagonist is a bit of a (can I call it) villain, and the idea in and of itself. However, I did ...

    Dec 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Forgotten Academy Chapter Two - Evander

    Oh, this has proved endlessly entertaining. I'm ashamed of you not messaging me for this, Infinity. I suppose I'll have to follow you just to make you keep your promise. ...

    Dec 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Mr. Oldman

    Well, this was a fun read. Not sure if it has a meaning, but it wouldn't be as fun if it did, would it? Anyway, I thought this was an ...

    Dec 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fanfiction Re: Not What It Looks Like

    What is this? A 250-word short story that has the same power as a 2000+ one? And it's about the Batman? I believe I've encountered perfection, but unfortunately, that cannot ...

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Ballroom fight

    Well, that was comical. I'd ask for context, but honestly I think it's better without. (I'm that sort of person who doesn't need any context for anything. You could toss ...

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Other » Other, Other Re: We are on Table Mountain

    I quite like the idea of a Table Mountain. Reminds me of my youth, when I used to stand on tables and pretend I was the king of the world. ...

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Literature Re: The Adventurous Stories of Maxwell Jones Ch. 1

    This work gains bonus points for two married women and a sweet story, no matter what mean things Critical Ellmist says. Don't worry, Critical Ellmist is inherently a jerk. Anyway, ...

    Dec 1, 2015


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