-
Re: Like a Citrus
I do like stories of discrimination, as most of the time they try to be very honest about their subject materials, and at least they actually point out that gay ...
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: China Doll
Before I start this review, I can understand if you were just trying to write this from the perspective of a girl going through self-harm. However, if you yourself are ...
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: Another Life
You could say I'm a fan of end of the world scenarios. I find the desperation and the regret of the moment very intriguing, and your story summed it up ...
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: Why do we keep making children?
So, um. I did a thing. Which is comment on your other work. And yes, I think I'm finding out that you have a thing for works that don't feel ...
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: The Cruelty of Women
Favorite Line: "We all thought you probably died or something!” This must've been released for some time, but I saw the title and I just couldn't help myself. And really, ...
Dec 4, 2015 -
Re: Snapshots
Well, it's well known that one photograph is worth thousands of words, but this was surprisingly able to fit several of them in just over one thousand. While reading through ...
Dec 3, 2015 -
Re: baby ...."I love you"
Hello. You might not like what I say, so feel free to shield your eyes if this wasn't meant to be reviewed. I liked how you used Let Her Go ...
Dec 3, 2015 -
Re: The One in The Box
...Well, I can firmly say that this at least isn't as confusing as the first Salvador Dali film I watched. Don't take that as an insult or a compliment, because ...
Dec 3, 2015 -
Re: Civil War
I think this needed work. I liked how the protagonist is a bit of a (can I call it) villain, and the idea in and of itself. However, I did ...
Dec 2, 2015 -
Re: The Forgotten Academy Chapter Two - Evander
Oh, this has proved endlessly entertaining. I'm ashamed of you not messaging me for this, Infinity. I suppose I'll have to follow you just to make you keep your promise. ...
Dec 2, 2015 -
Re: Mr. Oldman
Well, this was a fun read. Not sure if it has a meaning, but it wouldn't be as fun if it did, would it? Anyway, I thought this was an ...
Dec 2, 2015 -
Re: Not What It Looks Like
What is this? A 250-word short story that has the same power as a 2000+ one? And it's about the Batman? I believe I've encountered perfection, but unfortunately, that cannot ...
Dec 1, 2015 -
Re: Ballroom fight
Well, that was comical. I'd ask for context, but honestly I think it's better without. (I'm that sort of person who doesn't need any context for anything. You could toss ...
Dec 1, 2015 -
Re: We are on Table Mountain
I quite like the idea of a Table Mountain. Reminds me of my youth, when I used to stand on tables and pretend I was the king of the world. ...
Dec 1, 2015 -
Re: The Adventurous Stories of Maxwell Jones Ch. 1
This work gains bonus points for two married women and a sweet story, no matter what mean things Critical Ellmist says. Don't worry, Critical Ellmist is inherently a jerk. Anyway, ...
Dec 1, 2015
