Sujana

-"When I was around 10 years old I always wanted to be a teen ager but it was hard to tell which ones where Christian and not." Other than what ...

This had an atmosphere to it that I really liked, especially with the protagonist who doesn't believe everything he is told by his parents. I like how the protagonist thinks, ...

-"Now let's take a look at the Yu family and their hardship of getting through life." Unless this work is supposed to be humorous, ie in the Hitchhikers Guide to ...

There are a surprising amount of typos and grammar problems here for a work that, at least in my opinion, is quite interesting in its own weird way. I'll just ...

This was...cute. It's execution was cute, the fact that there were only two characters was cute, the premise is generally cute, so I can't say that I have any objective ...

Hello Chono. Like Lizzy said, I don't think introductions should be started here. There are plenty of very kind users who would love to start a conversation with you in ...

Ah, failed romances. Such a tragedy that this girl ended up in the worst job to face her own. This story is very likeable--it has a presence, it has a ...

What a peculiar story, what a strange execution. I think you can sharpen this to some extent, in order to make it more coherent, because from what I've read I ...

Innocuous Fixes: -"But his time she decided to let herself fall in love." This. -"Pandora Box was opened." The Pandora Box was opened. Actual Review: I was debating with myself ...

A Short Review on This Piece That Should Hopefully Give You Some Perspective: You have a worthwhile purpose and an ambition, and it shows. There's a vision to this work, ...

-" But I know, and now I’m here to tell you." Just a personal preference, but since this is a narrative I don't think the main character has to tell ...

I always like reviewing works like these, mostly because it's my forte. I think there are two types of subjectively 'good' stories: stories you want to live in and stories ...

Some quiet fixes: -"My brother Kaden and I are playing chess, he said earlier he would teach me too play." This along with some other lines prove to be a ...

Some Various Things I Found to be Easily Fixed Annoyances: -"Wearing a pink and orance camo tank top, jeans, and resting upon my bed." Orange. -"I think when I'll commit ...

Onomatopoeias! How I've missed you, my dear friends. And they aren't used too shabbily here, as well. Oh, wait, we're doing a review? Okay, okay. This was interesting. I've always ...