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Re: Another Day of Girl Talking
Hey Kanome, hope you're getting plenty of good sleep. While you're resting, I'm just going to review this--truth be told I've been following the progression of it on the 100 ...
Mar 26, 2018 -
Re: Somninecro
So, I have a confession: I'm a big sucker for weird, gory, push-it-to-the-limit sort of works. I understand why most people don't like it, obviously, and I understand that a ...
Mar 26, 2018 -
Re: American Voices (Podcast Script: Welcome to [REDACTED])
Okay, so I have actually listened to Welcome to Nightvale (I've only gotten to the Election and Strexcorp Arc, so please don't spoil me) which made me slightly confused when ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Bendicion
So I'm not particularly familiar with poetry or song lyrics, but generally I liked this. I could hear myself rapping it throughout, because it has a good rhythm too it, ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Back to the Beginning Chapter 1
Right, so I see this is still in the Green Room, so I might as well review it since I've already reviewed the last two. Now I'm going to make ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Back to the Beginning Chapter 2
Alright, so before I start, I need to ask a question--where is the payoff to the Niall Instagram message? Because I had completely forgot it until I read Chapter One ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Our Secret Dance [1]
Southeast Asian Gay Romance is my favorite type of cereal. Okay, but in all due seriousness, I do have a couple of gripes with this work. I'm not going to ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: A Merry Band of Monsters - Chapter 2
Okay, so to be honest, I'm digging this book. Usually my reviews point out problems in story, characters, and style, but I've found no clear problems in any of those ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Back to the Beginning Chapter 3
Right, hey, I've been paying attention to this for some reason. A friend of mine was pleasantly surprised by your work here and sent it over to me a week ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Elizabeth Marton
Right, so there are 20k words of this and I'm going to review all of it. I'd like to thank you for not occupying the Green Room by putting a ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Roxas Perception of Nobody: Fading (1043 Words)
I'm surprised this doesn't have any reviews yet. Did you post it up again? I could've sworn I read this a week prior. Anyway. I stare at the three in ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Since Infinity Chapter 4
Though I'm not a big fan of romantic fiction, though I've always found the existence of them fascinating. Since more than a few of my friends are basically connoisseurs of ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Potions and Poisons (1/3)
Your local mysteryman here, at your service. I just caught wind of your story, and since it seems like it's going to be a three-parter, I'm probably in for the ...
Jul 19, 2017 -
Re: Aliens
Getting back on my horse after a hiatus of reviews, I think I shouldn't have chosen this work to ride on, considering that I can't find any problems with it. ...
May 15, 2017 -
Re: I See You Invisible Man [Flash Fiction]
LMJ summed up a good part of my problems with this work, but I will say that it's not that bad of a problem. While I did enjoy it for ...
Apr 1, 2017
