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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: The Reckless Years: Chapter 1 Part 1

    Ohh, okay, thanks! :D Makes sense now!

    Apr 22, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Foster

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic Re: The Secret of the Costume Room

    Excuse me, but it's not like she's bragging that she's writing major literature here. This is BlindingSun's first story, and she's trying to improve by being on this site. Perhaps ...

    Apr 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Nona - Chapter 1 Part 1

    I look forward to seeing the rest! :D

    Apr 10, 2017
  • Other » Dramatic, Other Re: Horrors I Must Face

    Thanks a lot for the review. The stanzas don't seem to work on YWS, unless you upload a document, or a picture of some type. I actually didn't notice I ...

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Other » Dramatic, Other Re: Horrors I Must Face

    Thank you so much! I just wanted to write out my thoughts, so I'm surprised you liked it. I will fix the capitalization ASAP.

    Apr 1, 2017
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Persephone's Prophecy

    Sorry, ignore this!

    Mar 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Persephone's Prophecy

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    Hello, brooklyn193! This is a really good concept you took, and wove into a little story! It's cool looking at things from Persephone's point of view. Just a few suggestions, ...

    Mar 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: An Unusual Meeting

    I'm pretty new too! (*high-fives*) The ending was supposed to be that way, I was trying to 'distract' the reader with random comments, but I hope the ending wasn't too ...

    Mar 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: An Unusual Meeting

    Thanks so much for the review! I really didn't expect to find one here, so quickly, it's quite amazing. Anyway, I am happy, since it's not every day you get ...

    Mar 29, 2017


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