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  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Lool the Backpack

    um...

    Sep 13, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: Dare I criticise others' works?

    XD this entire story falls under the first amendment. You have every right to do everything you listed above.

    Sep 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: [Halberd] Ruby File (1) Casino (scrapped)

    O_O u fergot a comma!

    Aug 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Legend of He Who Endured: Prologue

    Guys, I love love love the reviews but please, you gotta make it more specific. KatyaElephant You wanted me to split up the chapters. How so? How should i split ...

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Legend of He Who Endured: Prologue

    ok :)

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Legend of He Who Endured: Prologue

    And methrirr123? epic picture XD

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Legend of He Who Endured: Prologue

    Thanks! :D This is my first time writing a story book with a prologue and chapters so any specific things you want me to change? Also, I would like to ...

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Legend of He Who Endured: Prologue

    Hey, I'd appreciate it if you left reviews. Thanks!

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Pabo's Planets

    :) great job. Keep up the good work. Just one thing, "Pabo himself was no stranger to loneliness, but he was one boy. There were millions of stars." I grasped ...

    Jul 25, 2014
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Oh, my dear little sister

    Wow, you are infinitly better than me at song writing. This is a great song :D Its so easy to understand yet uses a enough symbolism to show what you ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Politics Re: Oh Jon.

    >.> are u familiar with capitalism? I dont think they use it in europe but its kinda corrupt :( its a theme in this story that is reflected by john ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Politics Re: Oh Jon.

    >.> are u familiar with capitalism? I dont think they use it in europe but its kinda corrupt :( its a theme in this story that is reflected by john ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Horror Re: A Murderer?

    thx :D i practiced a bit in horror

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: My surprise for you is mine. (Confusing huh)

    lol this was made when stories only costed like 20 points to make

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Grafitti

    aw thx :). That note to all part was an idea taken from a story i read but i did make up a bit of it

    Jun 26, 2014


Do just once what others say you can't do, and you will never pay attention to their limitations again.
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