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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Shattering Stars

    Ah, ok, I see. And yes, thank you for sharing :)

    Mar 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: january 24th 2020 - 3:13am

    Ah wow. So it was really something you experienced, then, huh? I really love how the writing reflects that. Its so telling -- I almost thought you may have written ...

    Mar 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Shattering Stars

    Wow, the end there kinda made me sad. I'm not going to leave this as a review because I'm not familiar with this poem style, but I think you were ...

    Mar 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My Secret Lifeline

    Thank you so much, I also felt weird about the whole "staim it in my brain" thing. It's like, I literally meant that I would "stain" my statement on the ...

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My Secret Lifeline

    Ah. I interchange between it's and it is because I feel that when it is read aloud, I need an extra syllable in the lines that have "it is." Also, ...

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Chaotically Saving

    Awww, don't say you don't know why you write! I love your writing still :) And I like that you said "I feel like it wouldn't be as authentic if ...

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Woman in My Bed

    Oh man. Wow. This is so philosophical.

    Dec 6, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Exsestential Crisis #1439

    I actually came back here because I was curious about the title, #1439. What is the significance? It piques my curiosity.

    Dec 6, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My Secret Lifeline

    Darn it, I can't find a way to edit this. I'm annoyed because in the last line, it should be it's. edit: nvmd I got it.

    Dec 6, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Believers

    Thank you :)

    Oct 28, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Believers

    Thank you. :) I write what comes to mind, and then revise to make sure I get my point across. Sometimes thoughts can be messy, and learning how to present ...

    Oct 28, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Exsestential Crisis #1439

    Of course, my friend. Stay strong and stay here on earth for us.

    Oct 28, 2019


In a dream you are never eighty.
— Anne Sexton