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Re: Okay
This has the emotion of the struggle to be positive and say with hope "One day" this had me reading because it was relatable and something for most readers to ...
Nov 28, 2014 -
Re: The Light in the Darkness
This was a well done piece indeed! I love how you put effort into to rhyming and yet were still able to make the puzzle of figuring out a poem ...
Nov 28, 2014 -
Re: Fear
This has me thinking of the simple saying "A man of few words." which interlocks with this. Though this may be short the few words that were said have meaning. ...
Nov 27, 2014 -
Re: Personality rant
I can relate with this quiet alot and understand your point. This reminds me of the simple saying "Every one is diffrent." which mean we all have our own highs ...
Nov 27, 2014 -
Re: October
This has a powerful message to it indeed. People are mistreated and beater for something like this. This poem reminds me of the saying "Sticks and Stones may Break my ...
Nov 27, 2014 -
Re: Heaven's Angel, Hell's Rebel.
I really do love the message in this story and how poems are like a puzzle to solve the meaning and with each persons diffrent opinion this is still relatable. ...
Nov 27, 2014 -
Re: maybe God will turn us into galaxies in heaven
Not many people have the imagination to write something as elaborate special and unique as this. I found the third really cute and enjoyable and cute. The fact that you ...
Nov 27, 2014 -
Re: Summer
This was story that was told in a poem that was pictured with images that were created with this piece. This has a lot of description and if read out ...
Nov 27, 2014 -
Re: Departures
Thus us an amazing piece of work! I have also thought of this subject many times! This is quiet an inspiring piece! I love how it takes a scary suspenseful ...
Nov 27, 2014 -
Re: Voices
I enjoyed your story to the fullest. In a way I can relate to loss of memory so I can see this in a diffrent way and appreciate it. This ...
Nov 26, 2014
