StoryWeaver13

I like the whole idea, but I actually think I would've liked it more if it was even just a little less straightforward. I would've liked to just get a ...

I agree with the first reviewer, there were times when you couldn't define the "partner," "Blue Jay," yadda yadda yadda. I think I followed your story pretty easy but there ...

Well, this is a bitter little piece...*Sigh* Tomorrow's Monday, isn't it? But anyway, I agree with the reviewers before me; you just need to expand on it and let it ...

I'm not really sure what you're getting at...maybe this just isn't my thing but I thought it was a little weird...umm, what else is there to say? I'm not a ...

Everyone in the world can claim to be a part of a dysfunctional family. Not me, though. No, my family has proven far too many times to count that they ...

My problem with this is that it's too simple. I get what you're saying because I know how all of this feels being a writer and all, but I felt ...

For the most part I like this, I love the depth and imagery it has, but at the same time it also has a directness about it. But actually, I ...

I think your problem is you stay too focused on the story; you tell us what happens but you don't open us up to how you feel so that we ...

Okay, my first complaint is how you shift tenses. Sometimes you make it sounds like you're in that time and place, while others it sounds like the past. It just ...

I hate being mean, but sometimes I feel like I have to. Remember, this is only because I see room for improvement, and of course, it's only an opinion... First ...

Ugghhh I hate anything that involves us girls being disrespected or degraded, and I honestly hate anything in this area!!! BUT I have to say that this somehow managed to ...

This is okay, but I feel like it has the potential to be amazing. And I think all you have to do is stay away from that rhyme scheme. Rhyme ...

Well I found this by accident but I gotta say, wow. :LOL: Anyway, there isn't really a way to review this stuff seriously, is there? But as far as being ...

I felt like the lines were too short and, because of that, and because it was so small, it didn't have a lot of force. I'm not saying that a ...

It isn't very good. I don't usually write poetry. That's okay, why not start learning? And I think that's really what's going to help you - practice. Poetry is hard ...