StoryWeaver13

One day I'll see a shooting star. I'l probley wish for something irresponsible, Like A car. Probably But like they say wishes never get you far. Life is full of ...

Okay, so I really like this. I know, I know, I'm supposed to be critical, but there was a rough rhythm to it that was really natural and cool. The ...

I agree with what the last person said correction-wise, so I won't go over all that again; I'll just say, this is a good poem. I don't usually like the ...

This was a nice poem; unlike a lot of religious pieces on the site it isn't preachy or offensive to other religions - like I believe Christianity itself should be, ...

The idea behind this is really good, and it can be really hard to write about stuff that's going on in our modern world because 1. most people don't want ...

Okay, to be honest I'm not a fan of this and I'll tell you why. The first (and biggest) issue is the format - you have a huge block of ...

My first impression was that this would be really shaky and have a feeble rhyme scheme, but actually it was really nice. You got deeper and deeper into this, and ...

My heartbeat quickened as my Mom and I kneeled the small garden behind our stone house. Her long, flaming red hair fell over her soft shoulders. Her striking green eyes, ...

This is on my to-read list; I've heard so much about it and now (like I did with Twilight, though I hated it) I want to see what all the ...

This is sweet, I've never been a huge fan of religious poems and stuff because they tend to verge on being preachy, but this was nice and simple and pure ...

Okay, so I read the first chapter and have to say that this one is much better. On the other hand, it could still use some improvement. The first thing ...

I watched Mortimer as he sat outside. He looked across the road, at the open gate that led to the graveyard. Now obviously this is not normal behaviour, for a ...

My styurps clicked against the hard wood floor of the bar. The slated doors swung aimlessly in their frame. The piano was playing lightly in the backround. The smell of ...

Wazzup? OK, so here's my take on this... I actually really like this. The first stanza was my favorite; it was really powerful and had a good rhythm to it. ...

Please don't take this too offensively, but I've seen this all before. I know this kind of thing is popular and I also know why. People (especially young adults/teens) can ...