Stormcrow

...i dont really know how to respond to that review.... a lot of it was just burbling. But thank you for what you did say. however I didn't really know ...

Im sorry... no that isnt a review, although it is a great way to gain lots of points :/. As you are new ill explain it to you. A review ...

:/ because everyone is always telling me my chapters are too long and you have shortish chapters. Mine range from 5-9k words long

I always find it funny how short other people make chapters.... Do you know the word count for this?

Wow, thank you so much! I was aware I needed to split it, im just not sure how. Thank you for reading so much lol, I didn't expect a review ...

Thank you! This was definitly an exciting (and important) chapter.... my writing has definitly improved

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...Wow. This is just super cool! It is professionally written, interesting, and about something that means something to a lot of people. If I didn't know any better, I would ...

oh. I average 4700 words per chapter

just asking, what is the current wordcount of your story? Im at 22 chapters and 113k words so i was wondering how long u usually make a chapter

hi there! I do NOT agree with what you said about the narrator (besides the info dumping parft, which i was already planning to fix). I love narrators like that ...

Hi, Just here to say that his makes more sence than you'd think, although i dont understand the bit at the end.

The thing is my writing syle has gotten a lot better, and this was written winter of 2012 Soooo Ive come a long way. And yes, I could use some ...

Wow, i never thought of all that stuff u mentioned! This is really valuable actually. However, the plot would really work with them blasting the ship because he needed the ...

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Very interesting... this poem is so simple yet complex at the same time. The first paragraph makes me picture a line from forever to forever, and the days gone by ...

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This is... interesting. The unknown factors in this piece are so large it really makes me WANT to know what this big secret it. First off, I'll quote my favorite ...