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Okay, here's an edit. Duo looked from Quatre to me. "I just don't get it. Do you talk to your Suit?" "Sure," I replied. "Whatever," Duo said and went back ...

Not much to say after that... except that it's beautiful. I don't think America will ever forget 9/11, nor should they.

I like the dialog and I love the name Traistal. Thought he was a girl at first, xD Anyway, keep up the good work.

A question: What does Twigs stand for? Is it the series name you based it on?

Fist off, we need to know who "she" is. Is it a wolf?

Have you ever heard "The Briar and the Rose?" That would be a good place to start. Listen. Anyway, thanks for posting. A round of applause for your effort!

A little explanation seems to be in order. First of all, Azure is Carl. He takes on human shape to hide. The "others" are also dragons, who you'll meet later. ...

Bravo! The description is great, and I loved the last line, "If only roses had wings."

Well, this is a fresh perspective. The writing is clear and the point gets across. A good poem!

The end was very well done, very emotional. I like the way the letter was written, though I speculate about "life and blood." Over all this was well done. I ...

The end was very well done, very emotional. I like the way the letter was written, though I speculate about "life and blood." Over all this was well done. I ...

Wow. You totally captivated me with that. I can't see many mistakes. It was well done and a real treat.

I loved the sentence where it says "tears polishing her eyes." The rest of the time, you just told. Describe the girl some more, as well as the village and ...

There were some spelling errors. Like "two pairs o enemy feet," and "a twig snapped under the weight..." Also, I think you should trim the introduction. Maybe you could integrate ...

Here's my two cents. The story needs more description, and the characters ought to have more 'flesh' to them. For instance, how does the lady look as she talks? What ...