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Tailchaser's Song ftw! This book is awesome; it's my favorite in the feline fantasy tradition.

I'm intrigued! Seeing "Prince Caspian" has rekindled my old love for Narnnia; this is a good work. Sorry, I haven't found any errors, but take this. *hands over a gold ...

Awesome! It reminds me of a story I read on Writers BBS; I forgot the title just now.

That was brilliant. Hands down, breathtaking brilliant. I could wax elouquent, but you need a review. Ok, the thing is, you transition from past to present quickly. It's like having ...

"We lose more admirals that way..." Ha, the beginning reminds me of "The Empire Strikes Back," when Vader "replaces" the older officer. Very good.

I read Saint. It was... interesting, to say the least.

I'll tell you something I've been told: write more to this. It's very hard to critique something that's only a paragraph long. That being said, you did a good job ...

Here's to experiments! *raises a glass of apple juice*

Are you kidding? Of course I'm interested! I can't find any mistakes, so I'll just say that this is a good beginning.

Of gushing waters and quilted mountains. Sewn together with strands of brown. Nix the first period. That's all the grammar stuff I could find. Overall, this is very good.

My face hot from heat It's repetitive. Maybe try, "My face hot from shame." Not a bad piece. It could certainly stand improvement.

Well, it looks as if Clueless has gotten all the grammar mistakes. Overall: this is an interesting piece. The repetition works well here. As for rhythm and all those other ...

*nods* I definitely will, Griff. I just need to finish the second one, "Ash."

I haven't reviewed this before because it's so great. So let me just say, I loved it all the way through.

You all make me ashamed of my outburst. :wink: Anyway, I got as far as The Fires of Heaven.