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I'd like to caution you right at the "beginning": for better or worse, readers will associate direct address with children's stories. There's a good chance you'll lose said readers if ...

There's a book called A Beginning, a Muddle and an End that might prove useful, or at least amusing.

No problem. Have a great day. :)

I don't really have a review, but I like this poem. It conveys its message well and does so with rhymes on alternate lines. Clearly you know what you're doing.

I don't really have a review, but I like this poem. It conveys its message well and does so with rhymes on alternate lines. Clearly you know what you're doing.

1) gee, is your name a Moby Dick reference? 2) It looks like this chapter has been thoroughly reviewed, so I 'll just leave a comment. I'd like to see ...

Marsha Diane Arnold is the author.

People seem to comment on its lyrical quality a lot. It's set to the tune of a folk song called "Work o' the Weavers".

I was going to review this, but grammar-wise it's all good. :) Instead I'll say it's a great commentary on Western society. I also think it's rather rash of us ...

Thank you, Danni! That line is based on the original "Work o' the Weavers"- "You'd never hae a cloak of the black nor the blue/If it wasnae for the work ...

Thanks, Monkey! The tune I used is actually from a folk song, so it's very interesting that you would read it as a rap. :)

You're welcome, Mea. In Kirk's case, I think the glasses make him look more dignified, but naturally your story means your rules. I guess I found this through Will Review ...

It seems this chapter has been reviewed thoroughly, and its author said she isn't currently working on it, so I'll just leave a comment and run. Why does Verona have ...

Who said anything about reviews? I want to read it.

Okay, so hopefully I don't derail the whole thread here. I wanted to say, it makes no sense to equate being gay (you "love" women, so why bother with the ...