StoneHeart

Ver useful review! Thank you!

Haha! Glad ye enjoyed it! Feel free to read more! It gets better. The ellipses are for effect I'm afraid. As for why I wrote this prologue, there is a ...

No prob . . . And no, I didn't like being called a kid at that age :D Even if I was.

I will be adding more chapters fairly soon! The numbers are dates. The one you saw was 2013 - April 21st. . . . I need to edit them out. ...

Okay, so Jacob isn't a bad guy, he's just practical. He does what he has to . . . he follows orders. He knows that it'll all end up well ...

Er, the places issue isn't important right now . . . you'll learn more about them later on, right now you just need to focus on Netheron, Arreland, and Halavarde.

When this Green Room Crisis is over with I'm going to flood YWS with my works.

Oh no, you have a good point! This is a bit old (About two months) and I'm better at monologue these days. My writing back then was getting a bit ...

Hey, thanks! It is appreciated! I'm not the poetry type myself (I think any kind of embellishment helps!), so don't mind. Thanks!

O.o huh, never knew. . . .

Sorry, this thing kept messing up, wouldn't separate the quotes!

Okay, just a quick comment . . . I agree with Exception! In every way. That part about 'BLACK' really freaked me out . . ..

Anytime.

Oh, and feel free to review any of the recent chapters of my book (They're in the green room still and need it!)

I'll get back to this review shortly, but a quick note: You need to learn how to do quotes [quote] Paste Text [/quote*] (Remove the star) and make this a ...