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Re: Snowhite the true story ch1
Yay, first to review this story (= Hey windy (; I loved the story first of all now to review ;D Its time to tell truth. The truth about what ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Our Kiss
Hello there my name is Mackenzie and I will be reviewing your work today (: Our Kiss When I see your face, Your lips are what I want to taste. ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Twilight
So if you guys are so sick of the damsel in distress stories why don't you try to make a story without a hero to save the day. Hmm, maybe ...
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Oh my goodness! I cannot for the life of me see what is wrong with Twilight. Yes, I am a fan, but i'm not totally crazy for it. But, lord ...
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: Schizophrenia (edited)
Wow, this was very intense. I looked at the contest,I wanted to enter but now I can't! This is so eye opening and the setting is just scary above all. ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: The Desert Needs The Rain
Hello there, name's kenzie C: Personally I enjoyed your song incredibly. Although I'm not a person that can help you see mistakes I like being one that can see the ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Abortion
Hello there Milascribbler, the name's Kenzie and I don't know how to thank you. You brought up the one thing I've wanted people to understand for the longest time. Also, ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: my love .
my love its unbelievable, [s]undescribeable[/s] it should be indescribable , untouchable. just the words to describe you, breath taking, heartbreaking the day i saw you, was unforgettable your tallnes
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
This piece captivated me entirely, I have been watching many Armageddon shows and this definitely shows a lot of emotion. That is how i picture the end of the world...Silent ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: No Title... A Work in Progress
Hello, I seesawed through unconsciousness. My dreams were only the sharp daggers of pain and the erratic breathing coming through my lungs. --loved this very powerful beginning and got me ...
Oct 13, 2008 -
Re: The Host
I am a huge twilight series fan and I loved The Host a lot better. It definitely felt more realistic and believable, I don't know why but sci-fi and vampires ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: what is lost and cannot be found; you gave up searching.
Hello there, I really liked how well this flowed and the plot of it. Very genuine I found no errors in it but, then again I'm not one to see ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: break up
Hello there, I really enjoyed reading this! I was happy when you held me When you kissed me When you said you loved me But then she came along I ...
Oct 9, 2008 -
Re: The Princess and the Mouse
Hello there, Really great for a child's story but as everyone has pointed out the mother was way to mean. I'm not going to repeat everyone so just edit in ...
Oct 7, 2008 -
Re: Oh, that irritable light!
Oh goodness only two reviews... there should be more than that this piece was amazing i loved the plot and the characters it flowed easily and i enjoyed taking my ...
Oct 7, 2008
