Stevie

OK Can you people literally tear this story apart. It's probably not the best ever but I just need opinions on it. I want every thing you think I should ...

Ok here's the first chapter of The Prophecy of Indigo Rayne, although I think I might change the title to The Riders of Indigo Rayne. (Please tell me which one ...

This is (at least part of) the Prologue of my new story Life's Story. I need some harsh critiquing for this story.. I don't know if this is going to ...

This is probably fall under some other category, after the first few chapters. -So mods please move if you feel the need-NOTE: The Prologue is based off of a music ...

First off I'd like to say that Jesse and Belle are not the main characters, but they are very important. Second oddly enough I got inspired for this by my ...

I know right now it doesn't seem fantasy but it is, just it doesn't come in until Chapter 2 or 3. I want honest opinions even if it's harsh. Underline ...

I'll stick to basic stuff: I have edited and looked through it, I think it's the best I can do without help. Grammer and spelling (though I have used spell ...