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Thanks! I'll keep this in mind while reviewing!

Thanks so much!!

Thanks! This review was very helpful! I'll try to add more description and details and lengthen this whole thing a little! I'll keep this stuff in mind!

Did I enter that twice? Oops...

Woah... Your writing style is so unique! Keep that up! Um...I'm reviewing this because you wanted people to because you might be entering it in a contest (right?). I personally ...

I will definitely PM you when I get around to typing up chapter four! Thanks for this review! I'll keep this stuff in mind while revising!

Thanks!! And please do read chapters one and two if you are interested! I'd love to get feedback from you! And, yeah, I do have to keep my personal writing ...

This is great stuff! Thanks!! I didn't revise this chapter as carefully as the past ones so thanks for pointing out these errors! I'll keep them all in mind!!! (YAY ...

If you go to my portfolio it should be under The Story of Us

Well, at least you noticed them (or was told about them)! I'm not very good at grammar so I focus more on details and overall effect when I review.

Will do!

Hey, thanks! This is probably the most encouraging review I've gotten (like you said, you are an encourager like me) :) You also pointed out some helpful stuff so I'll ...

Thanks! Again this is helpful stuff! I already started revisions and added some of this stuff. Thanks again. Do you want me to post on your wall when I publish ...

Thanks! this is helpful stuff!! I'll definitely take this into consideration.

Thanks for this review! It's super helpful and I've already changed some of the things you mentioned. Also, yay! Marcy is a great name! Your confusion is totally understandable in ...