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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Tyrant

    Spaulds here for a review! Wow! may I just say that this is possibly one of the best poems I have ever read! The formatting is a little off though. ...

    Jul 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Gasoline

    By far the worse poem I've ever read. If there was a way I could express how absolutely horrible this poem is, I would certainly try to attempt to explain, ...

    Jul 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Looks can be deceiving

    First and foremost, I want to be very clear that I don't know anything about your life. All my critiques are simply in reference to the work and the speaker ...

    Oct 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    I love what you have here. I want to make that clear before I continue, this is a strong piece on its own, I'm just throwing out my ideas if ...

    Oct 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Horror Re: f this

    Okay. So I liked the ending because it suggested a pretty interesting story that'd I'd love to hear more about. Throughout this whole poem, you have these pretty detailed and ...

    Oct 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: In Us

    This is the start of a very strong poem I believe. Yes, I believe, I believe! First off, you didn't even need to tell me you're a fan of Langston's, ...

    Oct 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: bowing standing flying

    I like the idea of this a lot, especially in the choice of making everything lowercase. It just creates this character that doesn't seem sure of themselves at all, despite ...

    Oct 9, 2017


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