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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Tyrant

    Spaulds here for a review! Wow! may I just say that this is possibly one of the best poems I have ever read! The formatting is a little off though. ...

    Jul 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Gasoline

    By far the worse poem I've ever read. If there was a way I could express how absolutely horrible this poem is, I would certainly try to attempt to explain, ...

    Jul 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Looks can be deceiving

    First and foremost, I want to be very clear that I don't know anything about your life. All my critiques are simply in reference to the work and the speaker ...

    Oct 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    I love what you have here. I want to make that clear before I continue, this is a strong piece on its own, I'm just throwing out my ideas if ...

    Oct 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Horror Re: f this

    Okay. So I liked the ending because it suggested a pretty interesting story that'd I'd love to hear more about. Throughout this whole poem, you have these pretty detailed and ...

    Oct 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: In Us

    This is the start of a very strong poem I believe. Yes, I believe, I believe! First off, you didn't even need to tell me you're a fan of Langston's, ...

    Oct 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: bowing standing flying

    I like the idea of this a lot, especially in the choice of making everything lowercase. It just creates this character that doesn't seem sure of themselves at all, despite ...

    Oct 9, 2017


Never express yourself more clearly than you are able to think.
— Niels Bohr