Starleene

Thanks for the review! The gloomy part about the igloo is her regretfulness at getting up, leaving the warm cacoon and entering the cold world. I have this feeling in ...

Sorry about the longevity of the review.

I just have a quick question: Does it seem believable to you? Like the whole tone of the story?

I get crazy when it comes to capitalization >.< I'll probably still tell you to capitalize just because my life wouldn't be complete without lol But thank you for the ...

None taken! Though I do believe in correct grammar no matter what point of view is taken. :) Though it is supposed to be told from a child%u2019s stand point, ...

Thank you for your critiques! :) I really appreciated them. "I don't think that your biblically correct here" I did alot of reasearch for this poem and I do believe ...

Yes I was speaking about Jesus Christ :D

There is definatly more to this story but this is what came to my mind right now. :) There will be more, I promise ~Starleene~

This kind of story is right up my alley. I love the mystery of this Aiden guy. You better believe I'm going to read! Yes, this should be a fabulous ...

Haha when I was writing this poem, it just came out and I didn't realize it rhymed until I read it at the end lol :) sorry :/

I loved this based soley on the fact that it didn't rhyme. You moved your story along in a natural flowing way. I loved it, Keep writting :!

This was pretty good, but I really don't like the rhyming. It restricts all the possibilities that you would have without it, you know. I really like where your going ...

Hey, thank you so much for the reviews. The MC's name is Claire, Cameron says her name :smt003 and I know it needs work, it was the spur of the ...

I love your poem. I write them to but im really bad at it, yours...speaks if you know what i mean. :)

yahhh you can't leave me hanging...i need more..what happens does her brother come home...does she become friends with this girl what happens??? :)