Starleene

You're so welcome, you lovely writer, you. :D

I like don't. It keeps with the slow and your meaning. :D

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Shhh ;D You're not supposed to give away my story!

Yeah, I was thinking the same thing about the back story. I used this as a prologue. Maybe I should change this to like...chapter 3? I didn't really edit it ...

This is not the complete chapter, I just wanted to get some feed back on what I have so far! :D

Finally -.- LOL

I am totally using that line like "It's your birthday! Gee mom, I didn't know that." Haha

I'll see what I can do :)

I'm sorry you weren't satisfied with the quality of the work that was given you, life isn't full of sunshine and daisies. I am not, or have ever been, your ...

Hey, there's no need to be childish. These authors are offering their professional opinion and critisism so their's no need to lash out at them. Also, the people you just ...

Oh, I see. You're trying to make a statement! Emphasising the end!? The end of the sentence, the end of the piece...Oh! That means the end of this review! Yeah ...

I keep forgeting that people haven't read my prologue which kind of throws them off and they don't understand why I start it off really slow :/

Sometimes I forget that people haven't read the prologue. The reason it seams so ordinary is because teh prologue is so action packed that I wanted to bring the reader ...

Thank you! I really appreacuate it ad by the way, yoou review was beautiful! Lol :)