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Squirtlepowiee

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Hanging Tree's Lament

    May I ask, what shape am I suppose to be seeing? Thanks! And Merry Christmas!

    Dec 26, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Hear Me Whimpe- Roar.

    Ohhhhhh! Wow! xD Understanding that, your story just got 1000000% better!

    Dec 23, 2016
  • Other » Narrative, Narrative Re: Unhinged

    Haiii! Nice story! I found one error. In the 7th paragraph, or this one, "n the auditorium the room was very dimly lit with only a few lights lining the ...

    Dec 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Fault in Me

    Alright, thank you for the tips!

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: withershins

    Haiii! I love the beginning, then I realized there were lines that repeated. Is this suppose to be a song or something? It's very good though. The title fits the ...

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Fault in Me

    Hrm?

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Loneliness

    Wait why are there 2 reviews on this xD

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Loneliness

    Hello! I'm new to this website, but I can tell that it's awesome. And you're poem is awesome as well! I think it needs just a tiny bit more work. ...

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Drowning

    Haiii! This is cool! I'm new to this website, but I can tell it has a lot of talented authors! And you're one of them! I love poems or stories ...

    Dec 22, 2016


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind