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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Hanging Tree's Lament

    May I ask, what shape am I suppose to be seeing? Thanks! And Merry Christmas!

    Dec 25, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Hear Me Whimpe- Roar.

    Ohhhhhh! Wow! xD Understanding that, your story just got 1000000% better!

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Other » Narrative, Narrative Re: Unhinged

    Haiii! Nice story! I found one error. In the 7th paragraph, or this one, "n the auditorium the room was very dimly lit with only a few lights lining the ...

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Fault in Me

    Alright, thank you for the tips!

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: withershins

    Haiii! I love the beginning, then I realized there were lines that repeated. Is this suppose to be a song or something? It's very good though. The title fits the ...

    Dec 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Fault in Me

    Hrm?

    Dec 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Loneliness

    Wait why are there 2 reviews on this xD

    Dec 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Loneliness

    Hello! I'm new to this website, but I can tell that it's awesome. And you're poem is awesome as well! I think it needs just a tiny bit more work. ...

    Dec 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Drowning

    Haiii! This is cool! I'm new to this website, but I can tell it has a lot of talented authors! And you're one of them! I love poems or stories ...

    Dec 21, 2016


Poems were like people. Some people you got right off the bat. Some people you just don't get - and never would get.
— Benjamin Alire Saenz, Aristotle and Dante Discover the Secrets of the Universe